Try to be the best you can be in stead of be backward and have no urge to make progress.If you try to be the shiniest stair,the world will be in full bloom. 自己写的😂,还望大佬指点(^V^)
Try to be the best you can be in stead of be backward and have no urge to make progress.If you try to be the shiniest stair,the world will be in full bloom. 自己写的😂,还望大佬指点(^V^)
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2020-07-01
!!!好棒写的好美ヾ ^_^♪感觉第一句句子成分有点点杂可以试试看用非谓语动词来替换be动词 ,棒棒加油(✪▽✪)
2020-07-01
第一句好长鸭,有点喘不过气,其他好极了👏🌟颜颜加油💪
2020-07-09
互?